Rough Cut - After Correction
Steve Roberts, our tutor, suggested I change a few things:
- When the character comes out with small smile, cut in to his face to show small smile, cut back out to show can splash.
- Make hand look as if it goes into purse and comes out.
- Bit of anticipation up before he falls into hole then make fall slightly faster.
- When skipping, he needs to go out of shot before cut to ice cream licking.
- The girls point of view shot of the ice cream on her dress is confusing.
- Make the girl look more angry in the long shot as man backs away.
Here is the animatic after incorporating some of Steve's and Matt's suggestions:
Some parts of the animation turned out decent like when he spots her and when he steps back from the car.